Saturday, January 24, 2015

Weekend Warriors Blog Hop

 Weekend Writing Warriors for other 8 sentence entries.

Here is my entry;

"Miss are you heading to Old Faithful today," said the boy with blond hair.

"Yes, my uncle..." she stopped what she was saying and looked around her for him.

He was at the storage car directing the care and transportation of his prized mechanical horse. The group walked over to her and she spotted her uncle.  

"My uncle has a meeting at Old Faithful."  

"You are not part of the Scientific Society gathering," said the girl with bouncy red curls falling out of a Pith helmet.  

"A Scientific Society? How exciting. What will you be studying?" ask Miss Winsome.  

This is an excerpt from my NaNoWriMo novel that I am currently editing.


5 comments:

  1. Mechanical horse? You've certainly presented an interesting setting with lots of intriguing elements. Hope your editing goes well.

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  2. A mechanical horse sounds like fun! And scientific societies too!

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  3. I loved the hints of how very different this story must be - the mechanical horse, the society....interesting snippet!

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  4. You have some nice details in here. The blond boy is asking, not saying. Miss Winsome asked.

    I do NaNo too!

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  5. Sounds like you've created an interesting world here. Great snippet!

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